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Death Metal and Poetry

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Posted 07-30-2009 at 08:49 AM by Marie

I'm just sitting here passing the time. My friend Manzo is a drummer in a death metal band and is playing at a bar tonight. A bunch of us are going. I'm not that into death metal, but hey he's my friend.
I wrote a poem last night (maybe around 11:30 or so). So, here it is...

Late at night at the witches hour
A young maiden cries in her sleep.
The people who have hurt her haunt her dreams
The one person who continues to appear.
Her addiction causes pain and sorrow
But she seems not to care.
For the young maiden whose cries
Echo through her soul.
Unheard of by all and will be the life of her.
The innocence lost to the cruel
Heartaches of Life will end this
Young maiden's life.
On a foggy morning the maiden leaves
With her black lace raiments as
She ponders the Death that is awaiting her.
She bends down and picks up the bottle
Filled with unspoken lies of Loved Ones Lost.
And she throws herself into the endless light
That fills her Soul.
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  1. Old Comment
    that was really amazing - what inspired that?
    Posted 07-31-2009 at 02:24 PM by khajiitchick khajiitchick is offline
  2. Old Comment
    my mom...she drinks maybe 3 glasses of wine when dhe gets home from work...I've told her I hate it but she doesn't seem to care.
    Posted 08-02-2009 at 04:08 PM by Marie Marie is offline
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    gothchick<3's Avatar
    This is amazing
    im sorry about your mother drinking.
    My step father does and unpleasant things happen.
    I can happily say i dont live with him anymore tho.
    You could write her a letter.
    I find it....easier unless your more of a social person
    Posted 08-14-2009 at 07:32 AM by gothchick<3 gothchick<3 is offline
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    okay thank you so much for the advice. i've recently talked to her about it and she's cut back kind of.
    Posted 06-23-2010 at 02:43 PM by Marie Marie is offline
 

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