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Despanan 10-03-2009 11:11 AM

Poem / Critiques FORBIDDEN
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by [B
Symphony in Mezzo #Fuck[/b]]

Ra Ta Ta Ta Ta Ta Tat Tat

I don't want to be stuck out there
With my ass hanging in the breeze

My Eyes replaced with chips of granite
As stars cast down their amber beems

You wrap my body in white silk
and all I can wish for is a return

To the set, of a movie,
About Vietnam.

Why do people lie to each other?

Oh yeah, you'd like to criticize that, wouldn't you? Well you can't. It's NOT allowed.

creature6 10-03-2009 11:30 AM

you are lucky that i like your style otherwise ....
it made me laugh it's a nice dedication.


http://esquaredfashion.co.za/wp-cont...939_1655_2.jpg

Beneath the Shadows 10-03-2009 07:25 PM

Well, it's not worth critiquing anyways, so nyah.

Despanan 10-03-2009 09:29 PM

HEY! You! STOP EXPRESSING OPINIONS!

That's against the law in this thread.

Still Jack 10-04-2009 12:49 AM

I like television and breakfast. I DO NOT LIEK HOTDOOGS...

ShadowxMakerZ 10-04-2009 01:24 AM

It turned into a freaken musical when I read that in my mind... shesh. Cool though.

SweetJane 10-04-2009 10:13 AM

Wait... the title suggests that neither poetry NOR critiques are allowed. YOU broke the first rule, Despanan!

Despanan 10-04-2009 10:26 AM

Oh Shit! blacktext

SweetJane 10-04-2009 11:13 AM

we'd better talk about something COMPLETELY DIFFERENT from both POETRY and CRITIQUES... how about hats? And how some people wear their hats backwards, because that's how they roll in the northeast?

Mir 10-04-2009 11:16 AM

No way. How about purses instead.

creature6 10-04-2009 03:52 PM

what about umbrella ?

ShadowxMakerZ 10-04-2009 04:27 PM

How bout boobs? arn't they not the awesomest things you ever scene.

Muahaha.

Ophelia's Snorkel 10-07-2009 07:00 AM

I love hats, especially wide ones swathed in veils. And yet, I never wear them. They won't fit over my hair.

I also love umbrellas, but parasols are what lowly umbrellas aspire to be.

I am indifferent to purses. Small ones are, I suppose, marginally better than large ones.

I adore boobs. They are among the world's perfect things. I'm so very glad I own a set, there whenever I want them.

I actually enjoyed the original post. That is a fact, not an opinion : )

Despanan 10-07-2009 08:27 AM

This is a classy thread.

Mir 10-07-2009 09:00 AM

This thread is not unclassy.

Still Jack 10-07-2009 02:17 PM

This thread is not not not un-classy.

SweetJane 10-07-2009 02:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ophelia's Snorkel (Post 570176)
I adore boobs. They are among the world's perfect things.

AGREED.

Boobsagreementtooshort.

Pineapple_Juice 10-07-2009 03:13 PM

Hooray for Boobies! tm

Mir 10-07-2009 03:25 PM

I hate boobies!™

Despanan 10-10-2009 08:36 PM

Classy:
http://ny-image3.etsy.com/il_430xN.89024731.jpg

Ophelia's Snorkel 10-10-2009 09:49 PM

I got your classy right here

http://blog.hemmings.com/wp-content/...terflyLady.jpg

So classy, she might be wagon kid's grandmother.

Despanan 10-12-2009 08:22 AM

Garfield is classy

http://20.media.tumblr.com/TIg4V4Tma...6S7Ko1_400.jpg

Necrophagist 10-14-2009 12:13 PM

Holyshit!!

SweetJane 10-14-2009 12:38 PM

... that's a new take on the under-boob.

CataclysmKitten 10-17-2009 05:56 PM

lol i'm enjoying the Garfield.


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