Bleed: It would help your cause if you could express yourself clearly, and to do that, you must write clearly. Otherwise, your challenged grammar distracts from what you are trying to say.
This community is a well read, highly developed one, with above average intelligence (I can only keep up with them because of the brute strength of long experience, which is still no match for natural analytical ability). To reach this audience requires disciplined communication skills.
I hope you take my advice in the kind manner in which it is intended. The best of luck to you.
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