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I read your poem thoroughly and admit that it is a very insightful read. The words and metaphors that you use are used creatively but it isn't too wordy. I also find that I can relate to this piece a lot. The metaphors coincide with the way they feel to me. Your rhyming is incredible! I have a write that is sort of similar, which i wrote when i was feeling on the edge of my wits. I might post it here if I feel people would like it. Thanks for sharing this because I really enjoyed reading it.
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