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Old 05-30-2010, 02:45 PM   #2
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This strikes me as a poem that was written very quickly, which isnt necessarily a bad thing I suppose.

To me it switches mood very quickly, and without warning, from line 3 to line 5.
I begin with credits for a creature feature and wind up with an indie drama remake.
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