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Catch · 03-19-2011, 02:37 PM

I think the poem has potential. Maybe re-eidted and place more emphasis on the greater meaning of the poem and work on the wording so it is more like a poem. I like the line, "the doubt and pretend like you did it out of some murky altruistic wisdom" and the Sun and Moon symbology.

03-19-2011, 02:37 PM	#16
Catch Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Bliss Posts: 4,374	I think the poem has potential. Maybe re-eidted and place more emphasis on the greater meaning of the poem and work on the wording so it is more like a poem. I like the line, "the doubt and pretend like you did it out of some murky altruistic wisdom" and the Sun and Moon symbology. __________________ I Like Cheese!