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There are several good things about this.
It is 100% predictable from the beginning, but I didn't believe myself. Surely, this wasn't about freezing people and putting them on show. That's so obvious. Despite being right, I was still surprised. That's impressive.
In addition, I went through a range of emotions and curiosities in only a few paragraphs. This too is impressive. How can it progress so slowly and yet reach it's conclusion in so little words? That's interesting to me. You cut out a lot of bullshit text that I think most writers would leave in.
Lastly, referring to wax figures as "abstract" is pretty brilliant.
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