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Old 07-19-2008, 07:31 PM   #22
thekorupt
 
Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: Alabama
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And where is this supposed source link?

The story sucks. It lacks a single original thought.

Not only does it lack original thought, but also believability.

As the newbie thread says... go get a book about writing and read it. Especially sections about grammar and storyline development.
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