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Originally Posted by KontanKarite
I don't think it was from the heart. It rhymed. It was bad.
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I used to be really harsh on my partner for writing bad rhyming cliches until I realized that beneath the very strong and impressiv shell, that is how he feels.
Sometimes what sounds like bad rhyming cliche to you or me, might be the most scaring confession of weakness for someone else. Not saying it's the case, just take that in mind.
I don't know what about the hospitals where you live, OP, but to me it sounds hilariously fake.
If it is true and you write from your own experience, however, feel free to correct me.