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Old 01-20-2009, 02:46 PM   #12
JCC
 
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Let's put into perspective just how overdone the description is in this:

The teacher screams.
The student picks up ruler.
The student puts ruler in teacher's vein.
The student picks up paintbrush.

How long did this take for the hypothetical student and teacher? I would guess at about fifteen seconds. How many paragraphs? Seven.
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