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Sir Canvas Corpsey · 07-17-2009, 03:08 PM

I actually like the word Gargen better, it sounds like some monstrous and exotic plant.

I'd have to say the most interesting part is the first two lines of the first stanza, they're quite quirky and drew my attention, the other stuff isn't as great but it all works together and compliments the theme regardless.

07-17-2009, 03:08 PM	#8
Sir Canvas Corpsey Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Australia Posts: 2,424	I actually like the word Gargen better, it sounds like some monstrous and exotic plant. I'd have to say the most interesting part is the first two lines of the first stanza, they're quite quirky and drew my attention, the other stuff isn't as great but it all works together and compliments the theme regardless. __________________ “Lots of ways to help people. Sometimes heal patients; sometimes execute dangerous people. Either way helps.”