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Old 10-03-2009, 11:11 AM   #1
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Poem / Critiques FORBIDDEN

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Ra Ta Ta Ta Ta Ta Tat Tat

I don't want to be stuck out there
With my ass hanging in the breeze

My Eyes replaced with chips of granite
As stars cast down their amber beems

You wrap my body in white silk
and all I can wish for is a return

To the set, of a movie,
About Vietnam.

Why do people lie to each other?
Oh yeah, you'd like to criticize that, wouldn't you? Well you can't. It's NOT allowed.
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Old 10-03-2009, 11:30 AM   #2
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you are lucky that i like your style otherwise ....
it made me laugh it's a nice dedication.


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Old 10-03-2009, 07:25 PM   #3
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Well, it's not worth critiquing anyways, so nyah.
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Old 10-03-2009, 09:29 PM   #4
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HEY! You! STOP EXPRESSING OPINIONS!

That's against the law in this thread.
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Old 10-04-2009, 12:49 AM   #5
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I like television and breakfast. I DO NOT LIEK HOTDOOGS...
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Old 10-04-2009, 01:24 AM   #6
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It turned into a freaken musical when I read that in my mind... shesh. Cool though.
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Old 10-04-2009, 10:13 AM   #7
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Wait... the title suggests that neither poetry NOR critiques are allowed. YOU broke the first rule, Despanan!
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Old 10-04-2009, 10:26 AM   #8
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Oh Shit! blacktext
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Old 10-04-2009, 11:13 AM   #9
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we'd better talk about something COMPLETELY DIFFERENT from both POETRY and CRITIQUES... how about hats? And how some people wear their hats backwards, because that's how they roll in the northeast?
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Old 10-04-2009, 11:16 AM   #10
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No way. How about purses instead.
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Old 10-04-2009, 03:52 PM   #11
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what about umbrella ?
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Old 10-04-2009, 04:27 PM   #12
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How bout boobs? arn't they not the awesomest things you ever scene.

Muahaha.
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Old 10-07-2009, 07:00 AM   #13
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I love hats, especially wide ones swathed in veils. And yet, I never wear them. They won't fit over my hair.

I also love umbrellas, but parasols are what lowly umbrellas aspire to be.

I am indifferent to purses. Small ones are, I suppose, marginally better than large ones.

I adore boobs. They are among the world's perfect things. I'm so very glad I own a set, there whenever I want them.

I actually enjoyed the original post. That is a fact, not an opinion : )
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Old 10-07-2009, 08:27 AM   #14
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This is a classy thread.
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Old 10-07-2009, 09:00 AM   #15
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This thread is not unclassy.
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This thread is not not not un-classy.
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I adore boobs. They are among the world's perfect things.
AGREED.

Boobsagreementtooshort.
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Hooray for Boobies! tm
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Old 10-10-2009, 08:36 PM   #20
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Classy:
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I got your classy right here



So classy, she might be wagon kid's grandmother.
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Old 10-14-2009, 12:38 PM   #24
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... that's a new take on the under-boob.
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Old 10-17-2009, 05:56 PM   #25
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lol i'm enjoying the Garfield.
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