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Old 02-18-2008, 07:00 PM   #1
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Poems of Love

Copy/write down any poems you might have written for someone you care about and/or love. It could be for you, from you. And it can be anyone from your partner to your grandma.

Share them. Let's spread some love!!!
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Old 02-18-2008, 07:23 PM   #2
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Dear Crimson Emo Girly

Bite me.

Love

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Old 02-18-2008, 07:25 PM   #3
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Awwww Ill write you a poem Crimson
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Old 02-18-2008, 07:43 PM   #4
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Love poems can suck my dick.
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Old 02-18-2008, 09:43 PM   #5
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My post is epic win.
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Old 02-18-2008, 11:01 PM   #6
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My Love is quite forsaken, perhaps it is often so
That My Love becomes misunderstood, and my world becomes but woe
For as love is experienced, and saved many a wandering soul,
The love I feel is heartbreaking, and with time has taken its toll.

My Love hast lulled me to sleep, hast cared for me when dumbed
Yet simultaneously fooled me, and to my emotions hast but numbed
Destroyed has it my light, the luminousity of day
And replaced has it but darkness, the fire held at bay.

My Love begot my sympathy, transformed my heart to stone
Drove me to bear the dagger, and bleed that which I own
For gallows now I face, and fear have i felt much
But pay must I this toll, love hast dampered my touch.

Hanging, I feel not pain, for love hast taken mine
And love has stole my anguish, life is but bitter wine
"Oh take my soul, cruel devil, and remind those similar",
"That love is quite forsaken, that My Love was simply pure".

My Love hast taken my life, and soon shall taketh thee
Trod far from love my friends, and follow not like me
Claim love is thee redeemer, place broad and brim a smile,
For swords have thee behind them, as love is but begile.
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Old 02-19-2008, 01:23 PM   #7
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Love poems are shit. So says history.
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Old 02-19-2008, 03:08 PM   #8
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Darklust thank you, for you're the only one who seems to understand what you're supposed to do in this thread.
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Old 02-19-2008, 03:12 PM   #9
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Your supposed to worship me in this thread, right?
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Old 02-19-2008, 03:16 PM   #10
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Darklust thank you, for you're the only one who seems to understand what you're supposed to do in this thread.
Oh, we understand, we just want to tell you that love poems suck.
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Old 02-19-2008, 03:33 PM   #11
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I love pie it tastes like lime, Lime pie..it is so fine.
I also love chocolate mudcake cause its as great as ..."somthing that rythms with mudcake"
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Old 02-19-2008, 06:14 PM   #12
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Again, thanks Darklust.
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Old 02-19-2008, 06:18 PM   #13
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Crimson Emo Girl
You are such a dumb shit face
I hope that you die
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Old 02-19-2008, 07:11 PM   #14
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Great poem darklust,
I like love poems, and any other poem in general.
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Old 02-19-2008, 07:37 PM   #15
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Oh, we understand, we just want to tell you that love poems suck.
Ah, so you have no appreciation for the love poems of Edgar Allan Poe or Samuel Johnson or Emily Dickinson? Tsk tsk tsk.

Even Godslayer Jillian will tell you that the supreme being in his world is love.
Once you have had a taste of it, you will be able to relate to love poetry.
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Old 02-19-2008, 07:38 PM   #16
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TROGDOR!
TROGDOR!
Trogdor was a man
I mean, he was a dragon man
Or maybe he was just a dragon
But he was still TROGDOR!
TROGDOR!

Burninating the countryside
Burninating the peasants
Burninating all the peoples
In the thatched-roof COTTAGES!
THATCHED-ROOF COTTAGES!

When all the land is in ruin
And burnination has forsaken the countryside
Only one guy will remain
My money's on


TROGDOR!
TROGDOR!

And the Trogdor comes in the NIIIIIGHT!
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Old 02-19-2008, 07:47 PM   #17
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I kissed you as you slept
my secret to be kept
but my heart needs to know
would you have said "no"?

Your smile when you're awake
brighter than daybreak
impales my pretend soul
yes: I am vulnerable!

I tried but could not sleep
my heart your lips will keep
thought I had been the thief,
but was the victim in your sleep.
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Old 02-19-2008, 07:49 PM   #18
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A kiss is not a contract
but it's very nice
yes it's very nice

Just because you've been exploring my mouth
Doesn't mean you get to take an expedition to the south

A kiss is not a contract
but it's very nice
yes it's very very nice

Just because we've been playing tonsil hockey
Doesn't mean you get to score the goal in my jockeys
Just because I'm in an acoustic folk band,
It doesn't mean I only want poon-tang
I can't go around loving everyone
I just wouldn't get anything done
Oh because...

I'm only one man
Baby
We're only two men, Ladies
Baby, oh pretty babies
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Old 02-19-2008, 11:33 PM   #19
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There once was a girl called Fanoola
She kept on harassing me.
Driving me up the fuckin' wall,
So I gave the bitch and STD.
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Old 02-19-2008, 11:36 PM   #20
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Very nice ducky.
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Old 02-20-2008, 06:28 AM   #21
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Darklust, you're the only one who doesn't seem to understand that this thread exists so that we can remind ourselves how shit love poems are.
I fixed it for ya.

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Once you have had a taste of it, you will be able to relate to love poetry.
Not necessarily. I'm head over heels with the most beautiful girl in the world, but that doesn't change my opinions on love poems.
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Old 02-20-2008, 06:47 AM   #22
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love poems suck.
Yep, all of them. Every single one ever written.
That's an easily defensible position if I ever saw one.
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Old 02-20-2008, 07:39 AM   #23
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Oh my love,

Where are you?

If you are in the hills,

Let me be there too.

If you are on a mountain,

I will climb for days

Over rocks and trees,

And through the early morning haze.

Are you overseas?

Or in my city?

I feel that I have been waiting for you

For eternity.

Oh my love!

What joy there will be,

When one day,

One another we shall see!

You will kiss my lips,

And I your sweet eyes.

And all of nature will attune.

To our love-making sighs.

Oh, my love!

Come quickly!

For I miss you,

For lack of you I am sickly!

I need you,

I want you,

I must be by your side..

Then all things will be in tune..

Even if you wound my pride.


[Ok, that's all I got for a spur of the moment poem. If I keep going, I think I'll just get more depressed..]
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Old 02-20-2008, 08:10 AM   #24
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Oh, how I love thee,
Let me count the ways...
One Mississippi
Two Mississippi
Three Mississippi
Four Mississippi...
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Roses are red
Violets are blue,
I am a Nazi
I won't love a Jew
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