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Old 12-07-2014, 02:46 AM   #1
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I'll post my poems here, hopefully , you will tell me what you think:

Fallen Angel
I am immortal angel, and you know my name,
Yes it's Lucifer, the dark lord born in flame.
The One and only master, the keeper of hell,
The One who sows fear you can't even tell.

I can give you what you want, all that you need,
Because I know your desires , all of your greed.
My army are not demons, so you wonder „Who“,
It's so easy to decieve, oh yes, it's just you.

God gave you life, hoping you can be good,
But I am angel od death covered with hood.
I will watch every your step, wait you to fall,
And I know you will, because you are small.

Small and weak, worst creation of that silly god,
I want him too see you broken , evil and odd.
I will not lose this war, because you are my key,
Best weapon against good, as far as I can see.

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Mask
This world is so dark, so greedy and such a selfish place.
Where people wear masks instead of showing their face.
They kept it hidden for too long , so it started to rust,
They don't know who they are, so it turned into dust.

Moral values are so much destroyed, almost lost,
People will fight for what they want by any cost.
It doesn't really matter if they lie or run over others,
To get what they want, they would betray their brothers.

Day by day ignorance is becoming common thing,
I feel afraid what future holds, what it will bring.
It's sad all this is happening in such advanced age.
Hopefully this will be just another turn of the page.

But no, it's not just a phase, it's a never ending doom,
Where people die in name of freedom, but for whom?
For greedy politicians that see nothing but money,
For such evil people who think our wishes are funny.

They enslaved everyone but we still think we are free
They control every aspect of your life, that's the key.
All they want is to make you fit into a mold,
So they can do what they want, to get more gold.

Great minds will always strugle to resist control,
But system will break them and take each soul.
Wake up people or you will end up like cattle,
Try to understand that this is your life battle.

No one will fight for you because only you can,
Will you crawl like a snake or stand like a man?
That choice is yours and always will be,
Strip that binding and tell me what you see.

If you can see chaos, suffering and people in pain,
Then congratulations, you are one of the few sane.
Now when you are free, search who you really are,
And you will find it trough suffer, it's not that far.

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Death
Quick, slow, painful, natural, comes in all forms,
It can pass unnoticed, and sometimes with storms.
Rapists, killers, humans, it will catch us all,
No one has ever escaped it , we all must fall.

When you think about it, it seems so far,
When you look at it, it's like hidden star.
You fear it, because it can happen soon,
There is no cure, no one is immune.

Some people call death bad, sad, unwanted,
Because they feel like they are haunted.
But what death is, what lesson does it carry,
Is it really that awful, is it really that scary.

Life and death are both sides of the coin,
And when the time comes, they will rejoin.
Death's message is simple, have no fear,
Enjoy your life, I think that's very clear.

When you live your life fully and with smile,
You will see that every day was worthwhile.
And when the life music comes to its end,
Tell them not to mourn you, the coin will blend.
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Old 12-11-2014, 08:47 PM   #2
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Wow! I love these poems. I have to say my favorite is Mask, it is very inspirational. �� This makes me want to start writing again.
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Old 12-16-2014, 11:18 PM   #3
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Thank you.
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Old 12-21-2014, 04:04 PM   #4
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These poems are amazing. You are very good. I like the one about the Devil and Mask. Very good Hope to see more of your works
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Old 12-29-2014, 12:31 AM   #5
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You can read all my english poems here: http://allpoetry.com/poems/by/Alexandrulus%20M
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