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Old 12-19-2005, 06:34 AM   #1
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My Story

I know there's a thread for poetry, but I didn't see one for stories, so I figured I'd make one. Here is a little horror piece by me. It is a Silent Hill fan fiction inspired by the genius of the games. Enjoy, and forgive the many typos within.
http://furnation.com/arcs_place/stories.htm
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Old 12-19-2005, 10:21 AM   #2
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Would make the whole thing that bit more polished.

I liked the way it started in a very mundane, everyday setting that everyone can recognise - it provided a nice contrast with the supernatural aspect that followed. Gave the impression of being gradually pulled into this other world.
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Would make the whole thing that bit more polished.
Agreed.

Overall it was good and entertaining.
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