Gothic.net News Horror Gothic Lifestyle Fiction Movies Books and Literature Dark TV VIP Horror Professionals Professional Writing Tips Links Gothic Forum




Go Back   Gothic.net Community > Boards > Literature

Literature Please come visit. People get upset, write poetry about it, and post it here. Sometimes we also talk about books.

Reply
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread
Old 08-07-2010, 05:48 PM   #1
Darkemostar
 
Darkemostar's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2010
Posts: 98
I Don't Fit In

If nobody understands me why don't I have cut marks on my arms
I hang out with emo kids all the time but i'm a goth how does that work out
I bite I'm a vampire I've been bitten
Some ask who I am and what I am the reply is always the same I am Darkemostar a vampire-angel



(I'm not acutually emo just goth srry for the misunderstanding if there is/was one!)
Darkemostar is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-07-2010, 06:04 PM   #2
Alan
 
Alan's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2009
Posts: 2,932
No wonder you thought the other shit people post was good.
I really want to hit you.
__________________
Quote:
Originally Posted by KissMeDeadly
You fucking people [war veterans] are only a step below entitled rich kids, the only difference being you had to do and witness horrible things, instead of being given everything.
real classy
Alan is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-07-2010, 06:07 PM   #3
Sinjob
 
Sinjob's Avatar
 
Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: Fiddler's Green
Posts: 1,406
I can seriously feel all the decent pieces slowly burn away as they're replaced with this useless archive. That wasn't even a fucking poem.

You know what, I'm gonna bite and try this hoe.

HEY CHICK, IF YOU'RE GOTH AND NOT EMO HOW COME YOUR USERNAME IS DARK EMO STAR?
Sinjob is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-07-2010, 06:10 PM   #4
Sinjob
 
Sinjob's Avatar
 
Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: Fiddler's Green
Posts: 1,406
Quote:
(I'm not acutually emo just goth srry for the misunderstanding if there is/was one!)
THANK GOD. I needed that. Now us elite goths can sleep in the shadows...in peace.
Sinjob is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-08-2010, 10:01 AM   #5
Darkemostar
 
Darkemostar's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2010
Posts: 98
@ Sinjob: Yet again GET THE FUCK OUT OF HERE!
@ Alan: YOU TO!
Darkemostar is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-08-2010, 10:26 AM   #6
Darkemostar
 
Darkemostar's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2010
Posts: 98
@ Sinjob: I am NOT a hoe you fucking asshole!
Darkemostar is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-08-2010, 10:30 AM   #7
Sinjob
 
Sinjob's Avatar
 
Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: Fiddler's Green
Posts: 1,406
You are so a hoe.

Look at the way you act and the rhymes you spit. Hoebag.
Sinjob is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-08-2010, 10:39 AM   #8
Azareal Crow
 
Azareal Crow's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2010
Location: NYC
Posts: 61
Blog Entries: 1
I don't understand what you are trying to convey in this piece, a sense of being miss understood, a sense of wanting to belong? There is no emotion in this, it's just blah.
Punctuation please, there are no question marks at the end of your questions, your line about biting and vampires makes no sense due to a lack of commas or periods.
a better use of line breaks would also make this poem a little better.
Azareal Crow is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-08-2010, 10:43 AM   #9
Darkemostar
 
Darkemostar's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2010
Posts: 98
I Don't care about what you say sinjob i could have my cousin track you down!
Darkemostar is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-08-2010, 10:45 AM   #10
Sinjob
 
Sinjob's Avatar
 
Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: Fiddler's Green
Posts: 1,406
Really? With the four years of tae-kwon doe under my wing and him not knowing where I am, it's safe to say I'll be his trouble not he'll be mine.
Sinjob is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-08-2010, 10:47 AM   #11
Darkemostar
 
Darkemostar's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2010
Posts: 98
Jerk! i'm calling him right now!
Darkemostar is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-08-2010, 10:49 AM   #12
Sinjob
 
Sinjob's Avatar
 
Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: Fiddler's Green
Posts: 1,406
Okay. Tell him not to forget his dildos and Vaseline!
Sinjob is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-08-2010, 10:50 AM   #13
Darkemostar
 
Darkemostar's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2010
Posts: 98
he says that you should go to hell!
Darkemostar is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-08-2010, 10:51 AM   #14
Sinjob
 
Sinjob's Avatar
 
Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: Fiddler's Green
Posts: 1,406
Tell him I'm waiting with the blow-up doll now.

Get real, sistah. I'll rip your cousin a new one.
Sinjob is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-08-2010, 10:54 AM   #15
Darkemostar
 
Darkemostar's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2010
Posts: 98
Goodbye!!!!
Darkemostar is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-08-2010, 10:55 AM   #16
Sinjob
 
Sinjob's Avatar
 
Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: Fiddler's Green
Posts: 1,406
Quote:
Originally Posted by Darkemostar View Post
Goodbye!!!!
Baby come back with your meaningless rants. I want you to see your cousin beg for his life!
Sinjob is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-08-2010, 12:08 PM   #17
Azareal Crow
 
Azareal Crow's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2010
Location: NYC
Posts: 61
Blog Entries: 1
Quote:
Originally Posted by Sinjob View Post
Baby come back with your meaningless rants. I want you to see your cousin beg for his life!
Sinjob: you're mean, horrible and incorrigible...

and it's funny.

Although I really do feel bad for her.
Azareal Crow is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-08-2010, 02:21 PM   #18
Sinjob
 
Sinjob's Avatar
 
Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: Fiddler's Green
Posts: 1,406
As soon as she writes a poem that's not whiny and generic, I will continue to be snide and insult her.

Toughen that writing ability up.
Sinjob is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-09-2010, 07:31 AM   #19
Darkemostar
 
Darkemostar's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2010
Posts: 98
Sinjob you are the biggest jerk I've ever met! Didn't you get Lady Bewinter's message to leave me alone!
Darkemostar is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-09-2010, 08:54 AM   #20
Sinjob
 
Sinjob's Avatar
 
Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: Fiddler's Green
Posts: 1,406
Quote:
Originally Posted by Darkemostar View Post
Sinjob you are the biggest jerk I've ever met! Didn't you get Lady Bewinter's message to leave me alone!
I think I'll take my chances in the case of BOUNTY HUNTER LADY BEWINTER!

Because unless this is your cousin,
http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_7FAsUT6FeP.../arizona10.jpg
(who wrote the message on YOUR account) I won't stop my critiques any time soon.
Sinjob is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-09-2010, 09:24 AM   #21
Tam Li Hua
 
Tam Li Hua's Avatar
 
Join Date: Oct 2007
Location: Heaven and Earth
Posts: 2,606
Blog Entries: 25
Quote:
Originally Posted by Azareal Crow View Post
I don't understand what you are trying to convey in this piece, a sense of being miss understood, a sense of wanting to belong? There is no emotion in this, it's just blah.
Punctuation please, there are no question marks at the end of your questions, your line about biting and vampires makes no sense due to a lack of commas or periods.
a better use of line breaks would also make this poem a little better.
I must agree with this.

Also, other than Angel from the Buffy series, I don't know what a vampire-angel is..
__________________
"Follow your bliss..."
Tam Li Hua is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-09-2010, 02:35 PM   #22
Azareal Crow
 
Azareal Crow's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2010
Location: NYC
Posts: 61
Blog Entries: 1
Quote:
Originally Posted by Tam Li Hua View Post
I must agree with this.

Also, other than Angel from the Buffy series, I don't know what a vampire-angel is..
It's apparently a being that is both and angel and a vampire, although I would also consider it quite the oxymoron, the natures are too different for them to be mixed in one being without the being suffering some serious mental damage.
Azareal Crow is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-09-2010, 03:15 PM   #23
Alan
 
Alan's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2009
Posts: 2,932
Why the fuck do you keep talking about a Lady Bewinter? I'm not following.
__________________
Quote:
Originally Posted by KissMeDeadly
You fucking people [war veterans] are only a step below entitled rich kids, the only difference being you had to do and witness horrible things, instead of being given everything.
real classy
Alan is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-09-2010, 03:17 PM   #24
Darkemostar
 
Darkemostar's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2010
Posts: 98
Quote:
Originally Posted by Sinjob View Post
I think I'll take my chances in the case of BOUNTY HUNTER LADY BEWINTER!

Because unless this is your cousin, (who wrote the message on YOUR account) I won't stop my critiques any time soon.
Lady Bewinter doesn't have an account yet so that's why she sent the message off my account. And she will have one soon just wait untill Wensday. Lady Bewinter, and I will send you another message as soon as she gets her account on Wensday. We'll send you a message from her account! I'll be over at her house again on Wensday afternoon after her collage thing so just wait and see!
Oh and it is NOT the case of Bounty Hunter Lady Bewinter. It's the case of a fourteen year old girl with two older cousins that could and would beat the crap out of you untill you begged for mercy!
Darkemostar is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-09-2010, 04:16 PM   #25
Sinjob
 
Sinjob's Avatar
 
Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: Fiddler's Green
Posts: 1,406
Quote:
Originally Posted by Alan View Post
Why the fuck do you keep talking about a Lady Bewinter? I'm not following.
It's kind of a funny story, you see.

She got her cousin to send me a private message on her account and say it's "Lady Bewinter" and she'll hunt me down if I keep talking shit. Yes I'm serious.

Darkemostar: Please drink fucking bleach. You think you can be threatening to someone like ME at all on the internet? No matter what you say you'll still be a retarded little kid who doesn't know how to fucking write. A hoe.
Sinjob is offline   Reply With Quote
Reply

Bookmarks

Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off



All times are GMT -7. The time now is 09:23 AM.