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10-03-2009, 11:11 AM
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Poem / Critiques FORBIDDEN
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Symphony in Mezzo #Fuck[/b]]
Ra Ta Ta Ta Ta Ta Tat Tat
I don't want to be stuck out there
With my ass hanging in the breeze
My Eyes replaced with chips of granite
As stars cast down their amber beems
You wrap my body in white silk
and all I can wish for is a return
To the set, of a movie,
About Vietnam.
Why do people lie to each other?
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Oh yeah, you'd like to criticize that, wouldn't you? Well you can't. It's NOT allowed.
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10-03-2009, 11:30 AM
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you are lucky that i like your style otherwise ....
it made me laugh it's a nice dedication.
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10-03-2009, 07:25 PM
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Well, it's not worth critiquing anyways, so nyah.
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10-03-2009, 09:29 PM
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HEY! You! STOP EXPRESSING OPINIONS!
That's against the law in this thread.
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10-04-2009, 12:49 AM
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I like television and breakfast. I DO NOT LIEK HOTDOOGS...
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10-04-2009, 01:24 AM
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It turned into a freaken musical when I read that in my mind... shesh. Cool though.
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10-04-2009, 10:13 AM
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Wait... the title suggests that neither poetry NOR critiques are allowed. YOU broke the first rule, Despanan!
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10-04-2009, 10:26 AM
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Oh Shit! blacktext
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10-04-2009, 11:13 AM
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we'd better talk about something COMPLETELY DIFFERENT from both POETRY and CRITIQUES... how about hats? And how some people wear their hats backwards, because that's how they roll in the northeast?
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10-04-2009, 11:16 AM
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No way. How about purses instead.
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10-04-2009, 03:52 PM
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what about umbrella ?
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10-04-2009, 04:27 PM
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How bout boobs? arn't they not the awesomest things you ever scene.
Muahaha.
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10-07-2009, 07:00 AM
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I love hats, especially wide ones swathed in veils. And yet, I never wear them. They won't fit over my hair.
I also love umbrellas, but parasols are what lowly umbrellas aspire to be.
I am indifferent to purses. Small ones are, I suppose, marginally better than large ones.
I adore boobs. They are among the world's perfect things. I'm so very glad I own a set, there whenever I want them.
I actually enjoyed the original post. That is a fact, not an opinion : )
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10-07-2009, 08:27 AM
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This is a classy thread.
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10-07-2009, 09:00 AM
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This thread is not unclassy.
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10-07-2009, 02:17 PM
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This thread is not not not un-classy.
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10-07-2009, 02:32 PM
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I adore boobs. They are among the world's perfect things.
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AGREED.
Boobsagreementtooshort.
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10-07-2009, 03:13 PM
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Hooray for Boobies! tm
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10-07-2009, 03:25 PM
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I hate boobies!™
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10-10-2009, 08:36 PM
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Classy:
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10-10-2009, 09:49 PM
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I got your classy right here
So classy, she might be wagon kid's grandmother.
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10-12-2009, 08:22 AM
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Garfield is classy
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10-14-2009, 12:13 PM
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Holyshit!!
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10-14-2009, 12:38 PM
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... that's a new take on the under-boob.
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10-17-2009, 05:56 PM
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lol i'm enjoying the Garfield.
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