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08-27-2010, 05:26 PM
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Join Date: Jul 2010
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A Dark Depression
In the past I always was scared to show myself to the world who I was
I always sat alone not wanting to fight or talk
I came out of that dark shell when I started hanging arround demons
I always was dangerous but never knew it
People never did and never will understand me
Always in fights, always wining
Never caring who got in my way
I've reconstructed myself to be stronger
What are you waiting for
I am a destructive person who doesn't care
So what are you waiting for?
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08-27-2010, 05:26 PM
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Join Date: Jul 2010
Posts: 98
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Go ahead and post mean things see what I care.
@sinjob: This one isn't about death just the past.
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08-28-2010, 03:30 AM
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#3
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Join Date: Aug 2007
Posts: 2,721
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Lick my love-pump.
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All pleasure is relief from tension. - William S. Burroughs
Witches have no wit, said the magician who was weak.
Hula, hula, said the witches. - Norman Mailer
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08-29-2010, 05:43 AM
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Join Date: Jul 2010
Posts: 98
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@Apathy's_Child: I do hope that you can take a lot of pain.
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08-29-2010, 02:39 PM
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Join Date: Dec 2009
Location: CL
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I came out of that dark shell when I started hanging arround demons
What do you mean by this line?
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08-31-2010, 09:36 AM
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Join Date: Aug 2007
Posts: 2,721
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Darkemostar
@Apathy's_Child: I do hope that you can take a lot of pain.
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It depends. If you wanna trample my balls in patent stilettos, I guess that's cool, but paper cuts reduce me to a sniveling pile of suffering matter.
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All pleasure is relief from tension. - William S. Burroughs
Witches have no wit, said the magician who was weak.
Hula, hula, said the witches. - Norman Mailer
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10-11-2010, 09:41 AM
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Join Date: Oct 2010
Location: nonya, darlin.
Posts: 130
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Your poem is really good.  Don't take some of these people seriously. Some are just worse than trolls (Lower on the food chain, too) and will take you down to their level.
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10-11-2010, 09:50 AM
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Join Date: Oct 2010
Posts: 48
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darkemostar, honestly I dont much care for it, but then I dont much care for a lot of free verse, so take that with a grain of salt. Mostly I just wanted to say the most important asset of anyone who wants to write poetry is a thick skin. dont let them get to you, write what you feel and it will be "good" poetry because it will help you express yourself.
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10-11-2010, 09:57 AM
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Join Date: Dec 2009
Location: Smexyville, Colorado
Posts: 2,424
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Go outside, and get some fresh air, you'll feel better.
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Be Kind
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10-12-2010, 02:56 PM
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Join Date: Aug 2007
Posts: 2,721
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Everyone in this thread WILL lick my love-pump, even if it must be burglary!
Special exemption for Ape, for knowing a troll when she reads its word-vomit.
EDIT: Unless she wants to.
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All pleasure is relief from tension. - William S. Burroughs
Witches have no wit, said the magician who was weak.
Hula, hula, said the witches. - Norman Mailer
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10-12-2010, 03:45 PM
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Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: Fiddler's Green
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I'm glad to see you've taken the advice of a very talented counselor, Darkemostar. And that I'm stored in your psyche.
But this poem is still terrible.
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10-12-2010, 03:47 PM
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Join Date: Jul 2010
Posts: 634
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Quote:
Originally Posted by XxCire_StarzxX
Your poem is really good. Don't take some of these people seriously. Some are just worse than trolls (Lower on the food chain, too) and will take you down to their level.
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She’s lower than that when she started threatening people, and she is almost never on
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" The oldest and strongest emotion of mankind is fear"
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10-12-2010, 03:56 PM
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Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: Fiddler's Green
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Quote:
Originally Posted by XxCire_StarzxX
Your poem is really good. Don't take some of these people seriously. Some are just worse than trolls (Lower on the food chain, too) and will take you down to their level.
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The fact that you're not a troll kept me awake for a good three hours last night.
Fuck you.
My salvation was eventually found in the lucid dreams of Justin Bieber's titties.
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