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Old 12-03-2007, 03:08 PM   #1
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Question Walk down our street...

So yeah whats do you think??? Oh and by the way "B-more" is a nick name for
baltimore city...


Walk down my street, see the things I've lived.

Walk down his street.

Hear the things we scream?

Live it now, feel it NOW… Can you smell it!

The familiar shape of a caved in building.

Gaping. Molding. Mourning. Burnt out.

Someone called this place home… HA!

The landscape which reflects my soul.

Hear it, smell it, taste it (crawling down your throat)……….. Choke.

B-more

Born here, live here,

Cry here, Fight here, Die here.

The familiar sound of sirens.

Prisoner of my own city no NO

Not my city, their city, nothing here's ever been mine.

No such thing as happiness.

Not here, not for us, the generation no one loves.
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Old 12-06-2007, 04:44 AM   #3
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It reads like it would make good performance poetry. I love performance poetry.
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Old 12-06-2007, 03:04 PM   #4
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Would work great if it was adapted into a theatrical piece in the style of say; Bertolt Brecht
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Who's Bertolt Bretcht????
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Old 12-07-2007, 03:49 AM   #6
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Or Murry Lachlan Young...

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Who's Bertolt Bretcht????

Maybe if you tried Google. Only a suggestion ...
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