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Old 08-07-2010, 05:41 PM   #1
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Could I

Could I start all over
Could I ever be happy
Could I feel more pain
Could I say no happiness for me
Could I just dissapear
I wish...
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Old 08-07-2010, 05:54 PM   #2
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..you'd rid the world of shitty pieces like this.
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Old 08-08-2010, 12:11 PM   #3
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Once again a simple reordering of the thoughts would make this better
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