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Darky Poppins 02-11-2008 01:22 PM

I has written a poem
 
I think it is really good.


I likes to wear black,
Upon my back and sometimes on my feet.

I likes to wear really, really dark gray,
even on a hot day in may.

I sometimes wear green,
Thats been in the washing machine and the colours have run and it looks glum.

I also like navy blue,
When its brand new and almost as dark as black.

I like my lipstick
all black and pure I look like Bob Smith from The Cure.

I hate everything and I want you all to die.

Tha Duckman 02-11-2008 01:24 PM

Bwahahahahahaha!!!

Darky Poppins 02-11-2008 01:26 PM

black sheep ?

Tha Duckman 02-11-2008 01:29 PM

Let's start an imaginary band!

Darky Poppins 02-11-2008 01:31 PM

why imaginary


man we can take over the world and sing and dance and do drugs and die.

Goth Sentinel 02-11-2008 01:34 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Darky Poppins
I think it is really good.


I likes to wear black,
Upon my back and sometimes on my feet.

I likes to wear really, really dark gray,
even on a hot day in may.

I sometimes wear green,
Thats been in the washing machine and the colours have run and it looks glum.

I also like navy blue,
When its brand new and almost as dark as black.

I like my lipstick
all black and pure I look like Bob Smith from The Cure.

I hate everything and I want you all to die.

*wipes tear with black hankie.

Vincent Van Goth 02-11-2008 01:43 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Goth Sentinel
*wipes tear with black hankie.

Fuckin sycophant

Goth Sentinel 02-11-2008 01:49 PM

Fuck off I'm a Giraffe.

Underwater Ophelia 02-11-2008 03:19 PM

This is probably Rosie in disguise or something.

Corpsey 02-11-2008 03:21 PM

Who the hell is Rosie?

I've been working too much recently to keep up with the shit on the net.

tickingstitch 02-11-2008 03:31 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Underwater Ophelia
This is probably Rosie in disguise or something.

My thought exactly but I could not say it first

Tha Duckman 02-11-2008 03:35 PM

S'not. These guys are cool.

tickingstitch 02-11-2008 03:53 PM

Im going to have to punish you.

Clockwork 02-11-2008 04:09 PM

We have a literature section for talentless shit like this.

kimaru 02-11-2008 04:15 PM

Why is there a sudden troll infestation...?

Darklight689 02-11-2008 04:29 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Clockwork
We have a literature section for talentless shit like this.

Deuche. Thats all i have to say to that comment.

I personally liked it. It could be more interesting though, if you like to write you should improve as you practice.

Underwater Ophelia 02-11-2008 04:35 PM

It's "douche," you dumbass.

Clockwork 02-11-2008 04:40 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Darklight689
Thats all i have to say

I'm relieved. You should keep that in practice.

Darklight689 02-11-2008 06:41 PM

I dont care imma bad speller. But the need to tear apart every writer who decides to post stuff on this board is kind of pathetic. You two sound like the common everyday jackass. I go to highschool for that kind of immature nonsense.

Clockwork 02-11-2008 06:58 PM

You're reacting as if I insulted a poem you wrote. I honestly doubt Darky Poppins cares, because the poem looks like it's intended as a joke.

Green.Lady 02-11-2008 08:17 PM

Tsk, tsk... everyone knows that Robert favours red lipstick.

Wormboy 02-12-2008 01:49 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Darky Poppins
I think it is really good.


I likes to wear black,
Upon my back and sometimes on my feet.

I likes to wear really, really dark gray,
even on a hot day in may.

I sometimes wear green,
Thats been in the washing machine and the colours have run and it looks glum.

I also like navy blue,
When its brand new and almost as dark as black.

I like my lipstick
all black and pure I look like Bob Smith from The Cure.

I hate everything and I want you all to die.

We have a literary section, mate. That was crap by the way.

Darklight689 02-12-2008 01:10 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Clockwork
You're reacting as if I insulted a poem you wrote. I honestly doubt Darky Poppins cares, because the poem looks like it's intended as a joke.

im just sick of stuff like that.

Underwater Ophelia 02-12-2008 03:14 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ravenmother
Then leave. That's what this place is for. We as a sub-group are very Intellectual. Critical as well. I agree. There is a section for literature. I would have to agree though, that it does seem a little like a joke. If not, then a bit of work is in order.

Uh, we as a sub-group are not very intellectual. There are, of course, intellectual goths, but it isn't like all--or even most--goths are smarter than average folk.

(heartofflames) 02-12-2008 03:42 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Darklight689
Deuche. Thats all i have to say to that comment.

I personally liked it. It could be more interesting though, if you like to write you should improve as you practice.

That's actually a very creative way of spelling "douche".

Darky Poppins 02-12-2008 04:31 PM

I tried my hardest with that you beasts.

I is not Rosie, but if you have any flap pics or tits pics of her I wills take them off your hands free of charge.

Underwater Ophelia 02-12-2008 04:46 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Darky Poppins

I is not Rosie, but if you have any flap pics or tits pics of her I wills take them off your hands free of charge.

Except you are.
You're pretty weak for a troll.

Russell Brand's Boots 02-12-2008 04:50 PM

I is a submarine

*sinks underwater*

Darklight689 02-12-2008 04:54 PM

whatever i tried....*sigh* though people here are a bit too critical if you ask me.

Russell Brand's Boots 02-12-2008 04:55 PM

you forgots
*sigh, cuts wrists*

Darklight689 02-12-2008 05:57 PM

didnt forget that.. i used to cut wrists but its much more stress relieving to cut other peoplez wrists :D


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