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Necrophagist 11-29-2009 02:11 PM

My new song
 
Okay guys, I know how much you love my songs hehe :) This supposed to be a gothic poem. Goth for life! hehe so here goes:

Shrouded in darkness I stand,
I raise my withered hand,
I cry out in
pain,
My mind driven insane,
I look around and I see the Light,
Oh shit its the light of Jesus Christ.

I flee through the shadows,
Whilst pushing a wheelbarrow,
And run madly through the night,
Into the Sea.

Its really good right?

the-nihilist 12-02-2009 03:07 PM

Is this supposed to be about the French Revolution?

fussoult 12-08-2009 01:58 PM

The song without words sounds cool.
If you have the possibility, you should add a second (lead) guitar track. Well, it's just my point of view.
Keep playing music my friend.

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Cretin Dilettante 12-08-2009 02:01 PM

I lol'd heartily.

Necrophagist 12-09-2009 01:43 PM

[quote=fussoult;587344]The song without words sounds cool.
If you have the possibility, you should add a second (lead) guitar track. Well, it's just my point of view.
Keep playing music my friend.

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