sequel to the truth about life
 

No one takes you seriously. Everyone thinks your a fucked up, bitchy, troll. No one will believe you. When we're all hanging by threads, all it takes is a snip,snip, then you'll go down screaming. Your life flashes before your eyes, the toughest hardheads weep. Nothing could bother them until they saw the face of death. People say that they're tough, but underneath the shell of ego, is the urchin of who you truly are. Satan sucks the backbone off you, now you're sentenced to hell. You may think this poem's stupid, but the truth is we're all screwed. Our blood will shoot out of our bodies. Our soul is up for grabs. Remember when you close your eyes...death is coming. You'll be next.

This is idiotic. It's not true. You're just a depressed teen.

Fuck you!
 

You can shove it up your fucking ass! I don't give a shit what you think! You're just a stupid, bitchy troll! You wouldn't understand good writing if it bit you in your fat ass!

I'm a troll? Look at your number of posts, you idiot and look at mine. I'm not a troll. I'm one of the (sadly) now older members of the site.
Have you published anything of your writings, fucktard? I have.

Another person attacking Jillian? You could take it as a compliment, if you like warts trying to cling to you after you've drowned them in liquid nitrogen.

If you did any biblical study whatsoever, you'd find out that hell is derived from the greek word hades, which literally means the grave. There is no hell, just non-existance in death.

Oh, you think I'm a fuckturd! Look at you! Bastard! So what, I'm working on a book right now! You can shut the fuck up because you don't even know me! I'd suggest you keep your mouth shut! My sister and I are also working on a book together. You should be glad she's not here, cuz if she saw this, we'd both beat your bitchy ass! F.Y.I., if you're gonna make fun of my writings, DON'T READ THEM! YOU IGNORANT PEICE OF SHIT!!!!!!!

Oh yeah...
 

Are you trying to say I'm not a christian! Let me write what I want to write! Shove it up your ass, you bitchy know-it-all!

I couldn't care less whatever you are, i'm fed up with the lie that is hell, and people constantly using it as if it actually exists; so i constantly try to destroy this lie, person by person.

Sorry. I've gotten easily flamed. I know I've been an asshole. Go to the general section and you can see my full apology. I believe that's where I posted it.

Worst sequel since Attack of the Clones...

shut up!
 

I am very intelectual, and you need to just shut your mouth!

My, somebody missed her period today. If you truly dont 'give a shit' what we think then why does it bother you so much when somebody critisizes it?

Good for you! Here's a lollipop! We don't really care.

Oh, please dont tell your sister! Dont let her hurt us! PLEASE! I'd love to see that actully.

We would love to not read them. Dont post them. As a matter of fact I did kind of like it but I would have liked it better in the proper thread.

Where did he say you weren't? And you can write what you want. But if you do don't expect to only receive praise. If you dont want to get flamed for something, dont say it.

Yes, we know. Your Special Ed teacher told us so. As if we could'nt tell from all your other posts. If everybody is telling you that you're being a retarded asshole, maybe the reason is...you are.

I'm sure all of us are just beside ourselves with anticipation for this great literary work of our time...

I for one am glad she isn't here, since if she's working on a book with you, she more than likely has the same non-functional brainmeats that you do. The last thing we need is two of posting bad poetry and talking about offing yourselves.

Clearly you're the epitome of "intelectual."

Well, no. No, we don't. About the only thing that should be shut around here is that horrible orifice you spawned from.

Punk's not dead
It just deserves to die
When it becomes another stale cartoon
A close-minded, self-centered social club
Ideas don't matter, it's who you know
If the music's gotten boring
It's because of the people
Who want everyone to sound the same
Who drive bright people out
Of our so-called scene
'Til all that's left Is just a meaningless fad
Hardcore formulas are dogshit
Change and caring are what's real
Is this a state of mind
Or just another label
The joy and hope of an alternative
Have become its own cliche
A hairstyle's not a lifestyle
Imagine Sid Vicious at 35
Who needs a scene
Scared to love and to feel
Judging everythng
By loud fast rules appeal
Who played last night?
"I don't know, I forgot.
But diving off the stage Was a lot of fun."
[Chorus:]
So eager to please
Peer pressure decrees
So eager to please
Peer pressure decrees

Make the same old mistakes
Again and again,
Chickenshit conformist
Like your parents
What's ripped us apart even more than drugs
Are the thieves and the goddamn liars
Flipping people off when they share their stuff
When someone falls are there any friends?
Harder core than thou for a year or two
Then it's time to get a real job
Others stay home, it's no fun to go out
When the gigs are wrecked by gangs and thugs
When the thugs form bands, look who gets record deals
From New York metal labels looking to scam
Who sign the most racist queerbashing bands they can find
To make a buck revving kids up for war
Walk tall, act small
Only as tough as gang approval
Unity is bullshit
When it's under someone's fat boot
Where's the common cause
Too many factions
Safely sulk in their shells
Agree with us on everything
Or we won't help with anythng
That kind of attitude
Just makes a split grow wider
Guess who's laughing while the world explodes
When we're all crybabies
Who fight best among ouselves

[Chorus]

That farty old rock and roll attitude's back
"It's competition, man, we wanna break big."
Who needs friends when the money's good
That's right, the '70s are back.
Cock-rock metal's like a bad laxative
It just don't move me, ya know?
The music's OK when there's more ideas than solos
Do we rally need the attitude too?
Shedding thin skin too quickly
As a fan it disappoints me
Same old stupid sexist lyrics
Or is Satan all you can think of?
Crossover is just another word
For lack of ideas
Maybe what we need
Are more trolls under the bridge
Will the metalheads finally learn something-
Or will the punks throw away their education?
No one's ever the best
Once they believe their own press
"Maturing" don't mean rehashing
Mistakes of the past

[Chorus]

The more things change
The more they stay the same
We can't grow
When we won't criticize ourselves
The '60s weren't all failure
It's the '70s that stunk
As the clock ticks we dig the same hole
Music scenes ain't real life
They won't get rid of the bomb
Won't eliminate ****
Or bring down the banks
Any kind of real change
Takes more time and work
Than changing channels on a TV set

[Chorus]

By the way AFI suck big huge monkey balls. TROLL.

Yeah. I'm only a freshmen and I can tell you that. Jillian's right. None of it's true. If you're going to write something, write something good. If you can't write something good, keep it to yoursef. In fact, you'd be better off not writing it to begin with! I REALLY don't like this poem. Either you made it up on the spot, or you're just trying way too hard.

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By the way AFI suck big huge monkey balls. TROLL.[/quote]

I think A.F.I. is okay. However, those wierdos, who think listening to them makes you goth, are nothing but trolls. Get a life, iloveafi.

I like that. *klaxon - personal opinion alert* :D I don't think there's a hell either. For a start - where is it? I'd like to believe that when we die we all end up together anyway, and those who've made the bad choices will feel the weight of them, kind of like a tab in a bar (pay now or pay later!). I mean, what's worse than being the person who's not having fun at a party? Imagine being surrounded by a bunch of happy people - bleeeehhh! :P That'd be my idea of hell... in this life as well as the next!

That's my two penn'orth!

One question - I'm probably being dim (it's late here) - Is post number 1 the poem, or is thread referring to a piece of literature posted elsewhere?

So what would be an appropriate or adequate analogy?

Hm.....

Stumped.

Anybody???

Close your fist?

I don't think it matters, though; it's just one of those internet things to use terms relating to conversation when referring to the written word. Examples: "But you said that..", "What are you talking about?", "Shut up!", et cetera.

I think "bind your hands" would be appropriate, instead of "shut your mouth".

Oh! I can can just imagine someone wagging a scolding finger...

"Bind your hands, young man!"

Excellent stuff. "Shut your hand" is good too - or even "Shut your fist". Yes? No?