I has written a poem
 

I think it is really good.


I likes to wear black,
Upon my back and sometimes on my feet.

I likes to wear really, really dark gray,
even on a hot day in may.

I sometimes wear green,
Thats been in the washing machine and the colours have run and it looks glum.

I also like navy blue,
When its brand new and almost as dark as black.

I like my lipstick
all black and pure I look like Bob Smith from The Cure.

I hate everything and I want you all to die.

Bwahahahahahaha!!!

black sheep ?

Let's start an imaginary band!

why imaginary


man we can take over the world and sing and dance and do drugs and die.

*wipes tear with black hankie.

Fuckin sycophant

Fuck off I'm a Giraffe.

This is probably Rosie in disguise or something.

Who the hell is Rosie?

I've been working too much recently to keep up with the shit on the net.

My thought exactly but I could not say it first

S'not. These guys are cool.

Im going to have to punish you.

We have a literature section for talentless shit like this.

Why is there a sudden troll infestation...?

Deuche. Thats all i have to say to that comment.

I personally liked it. It could be more interesting though, if you like to write you should improve as you practice.

It's "douche," you dumbass.

I'm relieved. You should keep that in practice.

I dont care imma bad speller. But the need to tear apart every writer who decides to post stuff on this board is kind of pathetic. You two sound like the common everyday jackass. I go to highschool for that kind of immature nonsense.

You're reacting as if I insulted a poem you wrote. I honestly doubt Darky Poppins cares, because the poem looks like it's intended as a joke.

Tsk, tsk... everyone knows that Robert favours red lipstick.

We have a literary section, mate. That was crap by the way.

im just sick of stuff like that.

Uh, we as a sub-group are not very intellectual. There are, of course, intellectual goths, but it isn't like all--or even most--goths are smarter than average folk.