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Forum: Literature 07-14-2010, 01:50 PM

Replies: 23 Not sure if I should pursue this or not Views: 3,504 Posted By Melly I understand, but I think that the finished... I understand, but I think that the finished product needs to show ideas and tools going hand and hand to make a really well crafted story. But this is a rough draft, it doesn't need to be perfectly...

Forum: Literature 07-14-2010, 01:47 PM

Replies: 23 Not sure if I should pursue this or not Views: 3,504 Posted By Melly I'll keep writing as myself, no worries =) ... I'll keep writing as myself, no worries =) Apathy, you really do know your stuff. You're right, it has to be edited and worked on and picked at and you have to really WORK at making things good...

Forum: Literature 07-14-2010, 01:13 PM

Replies: 23 Not sure if I should pursue this or not Views: 3,504 Posted By Melly Apathy, I really disagree with that. You write a... Apathy, I really disagree with that. You write a bunch out and stick with the flow and then you go back and edit and work on it. If all you do is try to edit, you lose a lot of the feelings behind...

Forum: Literature 07-14-2010, 01:09 PM

Replies: 23 Not sure if I should pursue this or not Views: 3,504 Posted By Melly I'm keeping that bit of information to myself for... I'm keeping that bit of information to myself for now =) if I keep this up I'll post more installments as I go on and you'll get the answer to that. lady, I'm for sure not looking to please...

Forum: Literature 07-14-2010, 12:39 PM

Replies: 23 Not sure if I should pursue this or not Views: 3,504 Posted By Melly Not harsh at all. I'm not one to get overly... Not harsh at all. I'm not one to get overly sensitive with critiques and comments as long as they're constructive, which yours are. You might have a point, I never considered putting in more of her...

Forum: Literature 07-14-2010, 12:10 PM

Replies: 23 Not sure if I should pursue this or not Views: 3,504 Posted By Melly Lol, yeah, I'm just ridiculously hard on myself.... Lol, yeah, I'm just ridiculously hard on myself. Also I worry a LOT about the first impression of anything I write because one of my pieces almost got me expelled from school. So now I fret over...

Forum: Literature 07-13-2010, 05:05 PM

Replies: 23 Not sure if I should pursue this or not Views: 3,504 Posted By Melly That could be it. I'm really satisfied with the... That could be it. I'm really satisfied with the journal and the first bit where she's pretending to sleep but as it goes on towards the end I feel like it kinda falters. Maybe it is what I'm doing...

Forum: Literature 07-13-2010, 03:10 PM

Replies: 23 Not sure if I should pursue this or not Views: 3,504 Posted By Melly At first I read this and thought "so wait, I'm... At first I read this and thought "so wait, I'm good at bad executions?" Lol :rolleyes:

Forum: Literature 07-13-2010, 03:04 PM

Replies: 23 Not sure if I should pursue this or not Views: 3,504 Posted By Melly I don't know, something about the way the writing... I don't know, something about the way the writing is going, it feels like it's really.. I guess juvenile is the word. Like there's not much substance to it. That might just be I'm getting off to a...

Forum: Literature 07-13-2010, 12:53 PM

Replies: 23 Not sure if I should pursue this or not Views: 3,504 Posted By Melly Not sure if I should pursue this or not This is a story idea Ive been kind of tweaking at for about a month or so. I'm not sure if it's worth following. I'm not so happy with how it's starting off, so I'm considering scrapping the whole...

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