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Forum: Literature 07-13-2010, 04:30 PM
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Posted By allyssa
I think it starts out really beautifully and...

I think it starts out really beautifully and gripping but when you get to the miriam part, I think it is how you flesh out her character, she is too juvenile
she needs more quirks, she seems really...
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