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Forum: Literature 03-14-2008, 09:55 PM
Replies: 192
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Posted By L'Oiseau Noir
Just to add to what H.P said, in order for you,...

Just to add to what H.P said, in order for you, the writer, to write a decent story you must first find the style you're most comfortable with, and mold. Good grammar is of utmost important when...
Forum: Literature 02-29-2008, 05:57 PM
Replies: 192
Views: 32,450
Posted By L'Oiseau Noir
If I remember, H.P was the one who loved...

If I remember, H.P was the one who loved Penguins.

...

Make him a big, talking Penguin with a silk top hat, trousers, and a snappy tailcoat and cane. Oh, oh! And a monocle. He needs a monocle....
Forum: Literature 02-29-2008, 07:25 AM
Replies: 192
Views: 32,450
Posted By L'Oiseau Noir
So far, so good, H.P! Keep going. I want to...

So far, so good, H.P!

Keep going. I want to read more! :D
Forum: Literature 02-28-2008, 07:38 PM
Replies: 192
Views: 32,450
Posted By L'Oiseau Noir
I like the latest installment, H.P! :D One...

I like the latest installment, H.P! :D

One day, we need to do a collaboration. Mwahaha!
Forum: Literature 02-28-2008, 03:02 PM
Replies: 192
Views: 32,450
Posted By L'Oiseau Noir
Sure thing, but not here. No more thread-jacking...

Sure thing, but not here. No more thread-jacking for me. Just PM me, or thread-jack one of my old topics.
Forum: Literature 02-28-2008, 02:56 PM
Replies: 192
Views: 32,450
Posted By L'Oiseau Noir
I know, and I apologize to Humane for that, as it...

I know, and I apologize to Humane for that, as it was unduly rude of me; I just sometimes get so carried away.

But, let's get this thread back on track! I have some updated feedback on the story...
Forum: Literature 02-28-2008, 02:38 PM
Replies: 192
Views: 32,450
Posted By L'Oiseau Noir
I don't need to PM you, as I can sum it all up...

I don't need to PM you, as I can sum it all up right here:

You make supercilious comments usually along the lines of: Well, I win and you lose. Everything I say is right, and everything you say is...
Forum: Literature 02-28-2008, 02:15 PM
Replies: 192
Views: 32,450
Posted By L'Oiseau Noir
Who was apologizing? I sure wasn't. It's...

Who was apologizing? I sure wasn't.

It's just the truth. You like to run circles in arguments, always dragging it back to block one. There's never a real substantial argument when you're involved....
Forum: Literature 02-28-2008, 05:24 AM
Replies: 192
Views: 32,450
Posted By L'Oiseau Noir
Mhm. If you say so, Ophelia. You've been on my...

Mhm. If you say so, Ophelia. You've been on my case ever since that post of mine in your Sailor Moon thread. But I digress, it's no use arguing with you. I'd have better luck fighting with a wall.
Forum: Literature 02-27-2008, 10:02 PM
Replies: 192
Views: 32,450
Posted By L'Oiseau Noir
Valid points, but I was just offering him...

Valid points, but I was just offering him suggestions.

I just wanted to clarify one specific thing you mentioned in your post:

I'm not content with either formulation of the smiling phrase that...
Forum: Literature 02-27-2008, 09:45 PM
Replies: 192
Views: 32,450
Posted By L'Oiseau Noir
Just to substantiate my above statement.

Just to substantiate my above statement.
Forum: Literature 02-27-2008, 09:43 PM
Replies: 192
Views: 32,450
Posted By L'Oiseau Noir
No, you just don't like me. I never said his was...

No, you just don't like me. I never said his was bad, so shut it, Ophelia. You're only calling out my corrections because you have something against me. That, and you always have to be the person to...
Forum: Literature 02-27-2008, 08:46 PM
Replies: 192
Views: 32,450
Posted By L'Oiseau Noir
It wasn't a poor attempt! It just needed some...

It wasn't a poor attempt! It just needed some trimming, like the unkempt hedge, which hasn't been tended to for years, sitting in your grandma's front yard.

Believe it or not, I learned all my...
Forum: Literature 02-27-2008, 08:35 PM
Replies: 192
Views: 32,450
Posted By L'Oiseau Noir
Sure thing! :D For a brief example: ...

Sure thing! :D

For a brief example:

Crimson Von Paine demonstrated her latest martial arts kick on a hapless floor lamp, sending it down and spinning across the floor with such force the light...
Forum: Literature 02-27-2008, 08:02 PM
Replies: 192
Views: 32,450
Posted By L'Oiseau Noir
*Cracked her knuckles.* I'll give ya a...

*Cracked her knuckles.*

I'll give ya a critique!

I actually enjoyed the imagery you utilized in this story, H.P. I know, it's amazing--I said something positive. The only nitpicks I have is...
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