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Forum: Literature 06-30-2010, 05:51 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Wow, just 400 more views before Town and Turret... Wow, just 400 more views before Town and Turret will move into 6th place! But then it will sit there for a long time, as it would take 6,000 views to move into 5th place. I know, I am resting on...

Forum: Literature 01-01-2009, 09:00 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain 81 more views and this story will crack the... 81 more views and this story will crack the Literature forum's top ten threads of all time!

Forum: Literature 11-24-2008, 04:27 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain This is a forward pointer to the sequel Town and... This is a forward pointer to the sequel Town and Turret: Redheads and Blood, for those readers who wish to continue reading the adventures of Renatus, and Crimson too, The Leader and ...

Forum: Literature 05-03-2008, 01:55 AM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain I made many mistakes, but thank you for your kind... I made many mistakes, but thank you for your kind words Wormboy. :)

Forum: Literature 04-21-2008, 09:15 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain The completed version has now been published and... The completed version has now been published and copyrighted! Hooray!

Forum: Literature 03-22-2008, 10:49 AM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Thanks guys! Readers like you make it all... Thanks guys! Readers like you make it all worthwhile! But you do deserve better. There were so many mistakes; I am fortunate that you overlooked them all (or were too kind to mention them. Really,...

Forum: Literature 03-21-2008, 06:38 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Oh, and thanks to Bella Sophia for the idea of... Oh, and thanks to Bella Sophia for the idea of using Gnet member names in a story. :)

Forum: Literature 03-21-2008, 06:30 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Ta Da! OK, so that's it folks! Hope you enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it. I obviously left it open for a sequel. :) This story has gone to number 22 of all time and all threads in...

Forum: Literature 03-21-2008, 06:14 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Chapter 31 Chapter 31 Thin white curtains billowed gently and silently in the late morning breeze. As they puffed up and deflated in cyclic rhythm, Crimson looked beyond them to the cloudy sky. The weather...

Forum: Literature 03-21-2008, 11:05 AM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Thanks Raven, but I wrote it when I was too tired... Thanks Raven, but I wrote it when I was too tired and missed some gross mistakes: calling the child "it", using "foot" when I should have used "ankle", "lept" instead of "leapt", but damn! I had to...

Forum: Literature 03-20-2008, 09:49 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Chapter 30 Chapter 30 Crimson knew she had to buy time. Her father was weaponless behind and above her, too far across the gully to do any good. She herself was at the gully bottom, four stories below the...

Forum: Literature 03-19-2008, 07:37 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Yes! Excellent suggestion, and you are not the... Yes! Excellent suggestion, and you are not the only evil one who will resurface, with hard won experience with how to now deal with Herr Paine! :D And to the other reader's: I know I said the next...

Forum: Literature 03-19-2008, 07:20 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Chapter 29 As Crimson reached her father,... Chapter 29 As Crimson reached her father, her senses looked ahead and saw there no one in the cave, it did not go back very far and was empty except for the mountain bike. Computing bullet...

Forum: Literature 03-19-2008, 06:18 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Chapter 28 Chapter 28 When she left them Crimson hiked back down the trail to an opportunity she noticed just before: a place to climb the cliff where she would not be exposed and vulnerable should the...

Forum: Literature 03-17-2008, 10:27 AM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain 27 Chapters and 18,397 words so far. Not even... 27 Chapters and 18,397 words so far. Not even halfway to novel length yet. It will take this story and it's sequel for me to reach one novel, assuming the sequel is at least as good as the first. I...

Forum: Literature 03-17-2008, 06:32 AM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Well just remember, as I said earlier in this... Well just remember, as I said earlier in this thread: this is pure fiction, any resemblance to an actual person living or dead is purely coincidental. It doesn't mean you are persona non grata in...

Forum: Literature 03-17-2008, 06:12 AM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Maybe I'll have you come back as a ghost haunting... Maybe I'll have you come back as a ghost haunting the forest in the sequel. :)

Forum: Literature 03-16-2008, 06:47 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain I LOL when I saw afterwards that you had just... I LOL when I saw afterwards that you had just happened to have made a post to the REVENGE thread! Honest, I hadn't seen that when I wrote this last chapter! :D

Forum: Literature 03-16-2008, 05:57 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Chapter 27 Chapter 27 "Good, no police. It looks clear Miss." "Stay here, keep the motor running, I'll be right back." "Yes Miss." Molly ran up to her town house door, but found it ...unlocked and...

Forum: Literature 03-16-2008, 05:03 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Chapter 26 Chapter 26 The beginning sunset washed the huge boulders and canyon walls with a reddish orange hue, so it happened that they smelled the bloody entrails before they saw them. Crimson smelled it...

Forum: Literature 03-15-2008, 08:33 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Chapter 25 Chapter 25 The sun had descended between two western mountain tops, as if descending into the valley to extend it's day would avoid the inevitable twilight to come. Molly admired the view,...

Forum: Literature 03-14-2008, 09:18 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Chapter 24 Chapter 24 Von Paine and The Clan were not the only ones who could use optics to see distant activity. Mr. Child lowered the binoculars and turned to face Molly McKenzie. "You were right Miss....

Forum: Literature 03-13-2008, 04:34 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain This particular story, Town and Turret, should... This particular story, Town and Turret, should give you one example on how to write a novel: reach inside yourself into your own experiences and people you have met, people you know. Town and Turret...

Forum: Literature 03-12-2008, 09:08 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Yeah, I know it was brief but I just wanted to... Yeah, I know it was brief but I just wanted to get the muse percolating again now that the...distraction... is gone. There will be more this weekend, it's almost over! (whew!) Then I can begin work...

Forum: Literature 03-12-2008, 08:38 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Chapter 23 "Ahem!" Crimson jumped off the couch and turned around when she heard her father "clearing" his throat. Realizing she was blushing, she quickly turned to look at Renatus behind her. He leaned up...

Forum: Literature 03-09-2008, 04:52 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain I just copyrighted this story on FictionPress! :)... I just copyrighted this story on FictionPress! :) Go me!

Forum: Literature 03-09-2008, 08:46 AM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Thank you Crimson and RavenMother, but rereading... Thank you Crimson and RavenMother, but rereading it this morning, "You're the most beautiful girl..." sounded corny. Cliche'. I need to find a more original way for Renatus to admit his affection....

Forum: Literature 03-08-2008, 09:39 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Chapter 22 Von Paine, Crimson and Renatus... Chapter 22 Von Paine, Crimson and Renatus had been rapidly scanning and searching the entire city all morning and now it was approaching midday. Renatus felt tired. Crimson was still gazing out...

Forum: Literature 03-08-2008, 04:19 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Thank you Crimson. I was going to end the story... Thank you Crimson. I was going to end the story soon as the major character arcs and motives will be intersecting, but maybe I will make it a continuous story even though it will take a lot of work...

Forum: Literature 03-08-2008, 01:54 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Nope, sorry but that's not my style. I am not a... Nope, sorry but that's not my style. I am not a "lemon/lime" writer. I love to write romance, not porn. :D

Forum: Literature 03-08-2008, 11:39 AM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Chapter 21 (only because Gnet doesn't allow posts... Chapter 21 (only because Gnet doesn't allow posts more than 10,000 characters, otherwise it still would have been the end of Chapter 20) "Crimson, turn it on, and set it to power level three....

Forum: Literature 03-08-2008, 11:31 AM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Chapter 20 As Renatus reached the top of the... Chapter 20 As Renatus reached the top of the stairs, he saw Von Paine walk ahead of him into the large room. It was the top of the Castle Turret. The ceiling was the large round cone of the turret...

Forum: Literature 03-07-2008, 08:40 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Damn, I spelled Renatus as Rentus and spelled... Damn, I spelled Renatus as Rentus and spelled Brandan's name right the first time but spelled it Brendan the second time. Damn that 5 minute rule! Anyway, hope you all enjoy this latest chapter....

Forum: Literature 03-07-2008, 08:30 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Chapter 19 A lonely mansion on a barren... Chapter 19 A lonely mansion on a barren hill, surrounded by darkened forest. Silence. Not even a breeze disturbed the house. It was like a morgue. The painful chasm that was left when the...

Forum: Literature 03-06-2008, 07:57 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Follow up to my previous post: the statistics. ... Follow up to my previous post: the statistics. https://www.gothic.net/boards/showthread.php?t=9972

Forum: Literature 03-06-2008, 07:04 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Thanks Crimson. You know, since you write... Thanks Crimson. You know, since you write too I value your feedback. I am actually competing with you believe it or not: your Shadow Realm has twice as many thread Views as any of my stories I...

Forum: Literature 03-06-2008, 03:17 AM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Thanks Ravenmother, but I am not happy with how I... Thanks Ravenmother, but I am not happy with how I tried to describe Ed opening the door. I tried to make it suspenseful leading to when it opened, to try and make it scary, but I fell short of that...

Forum: Literature 03-05-2008, 06:26 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Chapter 18 Mayor L'Oiseau was becoming... Chapter 18 Mayor L'Oiseau was becoming concerned, not about the recall, but about her supporter and now friend, Mrs. Dawn Raven. Dawn had been very active in the anti-recall campaign, and now that...

Forum: Literature 03-05-2008, 03:45 AM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Chapter 17 At the opposite end of the club,... Chapter 17 At the opposite end of the club, in a booth far from the sunlit and colorful stained glass windows, another couple was concentrating on each other in the darker shadows. Crimson and...

Forum: Literature 03-04-2008, 06:37 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Thank you , and I must say I love your avatar... Thank you , and I must say I love your avatar from Apocalypse Now.

Forum: Literature 03-04-2008, 06:16 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Damn it, I forgot to say Chapter 16!!! ARGH! :D Damn it, I forgot to say Chapter 16!!! ARGH! :D

Forum: Literature 03-04-2008, 05:55 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain AUTHOR'S NOTE: Hi dear readers. Just thought I... AUTHOR'S NOTE: Hi dear readers. Just thought I would let you know that looking back I realize the cumbersome and less prosy sentence "The trees were still noisy" could have been better written as...

Forum: Literature 03-04-2008, 01:06 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Says the guy who never posted a single story. Says the guy who never posted a single story.

Forum: Literature 03-04-2008, 08:07 AM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain 15 chapters but only 9,631 words. I think the... 15 chapters but only 9,631 words. I think the chapters need to be longer. I will continue this story at least until mid-spring when I hope it will reach novel length. At that time I will compile all...

Forum: Literature 03-04-2008, 03:37 AM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Chapter 15 Reclining in the back seat of her... Chapter 15 Reclining in the back seat of her car as she was leaving the poor side of town, Molly was relieved to leave this part of town without anyone recognizing her. Why did...

Forum: Literature 03-02-2008, 08:54 AM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Your character is more interesting as a puppet of... Your character is more interesting as a puppet of MollyMac's character, so in a sense you are a robot who is manipulated by her.

Forum: Literature 03-02-2008, 06:58 AM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Bete-Noir is actually the waiter who gives Sarah... Bete-Noir is actually the waiter who gives Sarah the key to the club back in chapter 7, but yes, I can give your character more to say. And you too Sir Canvas! In fact, I have just the part for you...

Forum: Literature 03-01-2008, 09:59 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Well, the idea is not to sound like you, it is to... Well, the idea is not to sound like you, it is to just use everyone's name in my story. You see, I have this vision in my mind, it is the story all scrolling by, with characters etc. alraedy defined,...

Forum: Literature 03-01-2008, 09:56 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Chapter 14 "Your honor, a visitor to see... Chapter 14 "Your honor, a visitor to see you. She says she is a supporter. Mrs. Dawn Raven." The Mayor looked up. The Raven family was wealthy. She could use some help about now. "Send her...

Forum: Literature 03-01-2008, 09:23 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Chapter 13 "A recall?" The Mayor was... Chapter 13 "A recall?" The Mayor was incredulous. She almost rose from her desk in the ornate Mayoral Office. "Yes your honor. The petitioner's tables have popped up at the post office, the...

Forum: Literature 03-01-2008, 08:56 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Glad you liked it. Both you and your son's... Glad you liked it. Both you and your son's characters will be seeing a lot of action in the next few chapters! :) Stay tuned! :D And now a word from our sponsor: https://www.gothic.net ...

Forum: Literature 03-01-2008, 08:47 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Gosh! :blush: Thank you Crimson. You give me the... Gosh! :blush: Thank you Crimson. You give me the best encouragement to write! Your comments drive me to write more!

Forum: Literature 03-01-2008, 08:39 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Chapter 12 Guitar strings, plucked gently... Chapter 12 Guitar strings, plucked gently with soft melody. The smell of fresh linen. And growing light, pushing him to consciousness. He wondered: am I dead? "He's moving!" Haun said to the...

Forum: Literature 03-01-2008, 05:15 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain By the way, I hope no one takes this FICTIONAL... By the way, I hope no one takes this FICTIONAL story personally, it is just for fun! I by no means intend ANYthing personal as I kill off various characters in the story. It makes the story...

Forum: Literature 03-01-2008, 03:34 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Forgot to say this was Chapter 11. Damn it! ... Forgot to say this was Chapter 11. Damn it! Hope you all enjoy this one. :)

Forum: Literature 03-01-2008, 03:25 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Mir was very uncomfortable in the suit and tie,... Mir was very uncomfortable in the suit and tie, he felt his neck irritated and red and wanted even more to get back into familiar surroundings than this crowd of fake smiles and over-polite, over...

Forum: Literature 03-01-2008, 11:07 AM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Patient my dear woman, your part is coming, and... Patient my dear woman, your part is coming, and it is significant! Although, I hope certain scenes will not ...frighten you! MWUHAHAHAHA!!! :rubs hands together with an evil grin: And Miss...

Forum: Literature 02-29-2008, 09:49 AM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain I have been entertaining the idea of making it a... I have been entertaining the idea of making it a continuing story, which is feasable as there is a continuous influx of new members. Hmmmm...

Forum: Literature 02-29-2008, 08:05 AM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Goodness gracious, I almost missed this request,... Goodness gracious, I almost missed this request, as well as Mir's. Every time I try to draw the story to a close a new arc needs to be reconciled to accomodate all the requests! (whew!) But that's...

Forum: Literature 02-29-2008, 07:35 AM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Thanks. I am still kicking myself over using... Thanks. I am still kicking myself over using "You're aim" instead of "Your aim" but I was tired last night. I am even more tired now. :p

Forum: Literature 02-29-2008, 07:34 AM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Done. Read the previous chapter. I made you a... Done. Read the previous chapter. I made you a baaaaaad girl! :D

Forum: Literature 02-29-2008, 03:48 AM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Chapter 10 Von Paine found Edward and... Chapter 10 Von Paine found Edward and Zombina where Von Troop had said he left them: tied up and gagged in basement, where he had intended to execute them after he had killed the old man. ...

Forum: Literature 02-28-2008, 08:45 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Pardon me my dear readers, but I feel as though I... Pardon me my dear readers, but I feel as though I rushed that last chapter (as evidenced that I forgot to call it Chapter 9). When my muse strikes I become a feverish writer, my hands won't type...

Forum: Literature 02-28-2008, 08:27 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Von Paine tried to relax, looking at the fire and... Von Paine tried to relax, looking at the fire and loosing himself in thought of the town meeting tonight as if it were already a success, but long experience and cold analysis of the facts and...

Forum: Literature 02-28-2008, 08:01 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Chapter 8 The town council chambers were... Chapter 8 The town council chambers were overflowing with heads. Gentleman's heads with hair sleeked back and shining, and lady's heads: thousands of dollars worth of coloring, styling, ribbons...

Forum: Literature 02-28-2008, 07:28 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Chapter 7 Sarah was walking from the club... Chapter 7 Sarah was walking from the club towards her second story apartment. Humming one of the songs from her band's performance, she admired the street lamp moths fluttering about in the...

Forum: Literature 02-28-2008, 06:53 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain It's ok folks, I don't mind a little karma, I... It's ok folks, I don't mind a little karma, I have thread jacked a few times myself too so payback is in order. And Crimson: glad you liked it! Because I enjoyed giving your character their part!...

Forum: Literature 02-28-2008, 03:40 AM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Thank you everyone for the feedback! Great stuff!... Thank you everyone for the feedback! Great stuff! And yes, they are dear friends but I was trying to leave the reader hanging as to whether Duane might have romantic intentions or not. It becomes...

Forum: Literature 02-27-2008, 08:39 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain It does! Thank you very much! I must confess that... It does! Thank you very much! I must confess that I took technical classes in college and only the barest minimum of composition, hence my poor writing, but I will improve thanks to your patient and...

Forum: Literature 02-27-2008, 08:12 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain THANK YOU for the critique! Would you please... THANK YOU for the critique! Would you please give me an example about how I overdid the modifiers and adverbs? (I know I am a bit chatty) I have difficulty finding it in my own work, so I need...

Forum: Literature 02-27-2008, 07:48 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Sooooo....what does everyone think of the... Sooooo....what does everyone think of the romantic liaisons? The character development? The unfolding plot? And yes, the damn 5 minute limit forced me to leave a few grammatical errors and a typo in...

Forum: Literature 02-27-2008, 07:33 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Glad you like it! Hope you don't mind being a bad... Glad you like it! Hope you don't mind being a bad guy. I made your name Emil Von Troop, more Teutonic. And Crimson: I hope I you don't mind I made you my adopted daughter in the story. A kick...

Forum: Literature 02-27-2008, 07:32 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Chapter 6 "Father, why do you let her speak... Chapter 6 "Father, why do you let her speak so disrespectfully to you? And why the hell do you tolerate Duchmann? Why, I will throw him out myself!" Crimson Von Paine demonstrated her latest...

Forum: Literature 02-27-2008, 07:03 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Chapter 5 Von Paine walked up the stairs... Chapter 5 Von Paine walked up the stairs from the entrance where he had greeted Renatus, the two of them side by side, Von Paine holding the younger man's elbow sleeve. "You are yet part of the...

Forum: Literature 02-27-2008, 06:25 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Chapter 4 The new Mayor decided to visit... Chapter 4 The new Mayor decided to visit the club tonight, as the cabaret band playing this evening had entertained her before she had been elected, and actually helped raise funds for her...

Forum: Literature 02-27-2008, 05:57 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Chapter 3 The rains and drizzle had... Chapter 3 The rains and drizzle had suspended for now, leaving a muddy path for the German as he briskly walked to his personal firing range. It doubled as his pheasant and wild boar hunting...

Forum: Literature 02-27-2008, 04:13 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain I will be happy to incorporate you into the... I will be happy to incorporate you into the Gotic.net "alter ego"! :D But...I must confess I do not know you well enough to describe your part in the story. Tell me what part you would like to...

Forum: Literature 02-27-2008, 02:01 PM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Would you like to be in it? :D Would you like to be in it? :D

Forum: Literature 02-27-2008, 10:32 AM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Chapter 2 Molly was welcomed immediately at the club entrance. "My dear Miss McKenzie, you seem in need of a drink!" The barkeep took her umbrella and overcoat. "Thank you Duane. And make it cognac...

Forum: Literature 02-27-2008, 10:30 AM

Replies: 192 Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Views: 32,451 Posted By HumanePain Town and Turret: The Tale of Castle Gothica Chapter 1 The night sky was full of darkened clouds heavy with winter moisture, but they held back the rain with miserly frugality letting only drizzle collect on the stone sides of the castle....

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