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Forum: Literature 06-04-2010, 12:39 PM
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Posted By KontanKarite
I thought the first one was really bad. However,...

I thought the first one was really bad. However, your second one is VERY VERY nice. I like the flow. The last line, drop it completely. It's kitsch and unnecessary. "Life's music is all around...
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