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Forum: Literature 05-26-2010, 03:30 PM

Replies: 21 The Thinning of the Veil Views: 4,479 Posted By Underwater Ophelia No, I haven't heard it. I don't really like... No, I haven't heard it. I don't really like Abney Park. I did when I was a little younger, before they decided to jump on this whole steampunk bandwagon.

Forum: Literature 05-26-2010, 10:11 AM

Replies: 21 The Thinning of the Veil Views: 4,479 Posted By Underwater Ophelia My message isn't a "hate message," and being... My message isn't a "hate message," and being overly dramatic when you receive criticism isn't going to help you improve.

Forum: Literature 05-26-2010, 08:46 AM

Replies: 21 The Thinning of the Veil Views: 4,479 Posted By Underwater Ophelia That doesn't make sense. That doesn't make sense.

Forum: Literature 05-26-2010, 07:09 AM

Replies: 21 The Thinning of the Veil Views: 4,479 Posted By Underwater Ophelia It's not great. The rhythm is forced and clumsy,... It's not great. The rhythm is forced and clumsy, and many of the lines are just silly. "With an unspoken giggle" is one of these. You would never say "with a spoken giggle" so "unspoken giggle"...

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