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Forum: Literature 01-11-2007, 08:53 AM
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Posted By om3gag0th666
You should familiarize yourself; because even a...

You should familiarize yourself; because even a man such as Dr.Seuss has mastered it.

He's brilliant though, and I love him. The reason I picked iambic tetrameter is because it's all even, I love...
Forum: Literature 01-11-2007, 12:41 AM
Replies: 25
Views: 5,230
Posted By om3gag0th666
Rhytmn? Iambic tetrameter is the second most used...

Rhytmn? Iambic tetrameter is the second most used meter I believe. :'(

It's not like I was starting my line with spondees, or this was a double dactyl.
Forum: Literature 01-10-2007, 11:23 AM
Replies: 25
Views: 5,230
Posted By om3gag0th666
My intention broken down line for line: ...

My intention broken down line for line:

Whoever made this thing was mad;

The pendulum, whoever made the concept of time was probably insane.


whatever planned it was assured.

Planned =...
Forum: Literature 01-08-2007, 08:10 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 5,230
Posted By om3gag0th666
In this case it's the genius. :P Thinking about...

In this case it's the genius. :P Thinking about the creation that has mastered mortality.
Forum: Literature 01-08-2007, 06:02 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 5,230
Posted By om3gag0th666
Crap, I didn't even realize that. So what did you...

Crap, I didn't even realize that. So what did you think Jill?
Forum: Literature 01-08-2007, 02:49 AM
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Views: 5,230
Posted By om3gag0th666
You see what?

You see what?
Forum: Literature 01-06-2007, 02:28 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 5,230
Posted By om3gag0th666
Secured is used very carefully. I am not some...

Secured is used very carefully. I am not some hack who picks words to fit the rhyme, I took at least 2-3 dozen words and that one fit my message.

Secure doesn't always have to be a good thing....
Forum: Literature 01-06-2007, 01:51 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 5,230
Posted By om3gag0th666
Feminine endings = "To be or not to be that...

Feminine endings =

"To be or not to be that is the question"

As you can see it has eleven syllables, but the last beat is unstressed.

Masculine endings are of course ones that lack the...
Forum: Literature 01-06-2007, 01:01 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 5,230
Posted By om3gag0th666
I think you should re-read it, I don't think you...

I think you should re-read it, I don't think you so much as recognized the rhyme scheme, or the scansion.

Glad and secured are not a rhyming couplet, ABABCDCDEFEF...

Incase you aren't familiar,...
Forum: Literature 01-06-2007, 04:32 AM
Replies: 25
Views: 5,230
Posted By om3gag0th666
Pendulum

Whoever made this thing was mad;
whatever planned it was assured.
I know it wouldn’t make me glad
to hold and make my life secured.
Behaving like a deadly fan
I saw it stroke within its air....
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