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Forum: Literature 01-06-2007, 02:37 PM

Replies: 25 Pendulum Views: 5,230 Posted By DarkHeartedDemoness I didn't say you were a hack. I said that it... I didn't say you were a hack. I said that it sounded a little forced. Overall, I truly loved the poem.

Forum: Literature 01-06-2007, 02:22 PM

Replies: 25 Pendulum Views: 5,230 Posted By DarkHeartedDemoness I was saying that the first to lines are great,... I was saying that the first to lines are great, they really hook the reader, the words are well chosen and it's almost alluring. The two lines that follow feel forced, as though they were chosen...

Forum: Literature 01-06-2007, 02:16 PM

Replies: 25 Pendulum Views: 5,230 Posted By DarkHeartedDemoness You're absolutely right, "glad" and "secured" are... You're absolutely right, "glad" and "secured" are not a rhyming couplet. Perhaps my use of "couplet" was incorrect. What I meant to say (and I thought I was clear on this, but apparently not) is...

Forum: Literature 01-06-2007, 08:27 AM

Replies: 25 Pendulum Views: 5,230 Posted By DarkHeartedDemoness Decent start, a good hook and just cryptic enough... Decent start, a good hook and just cryptic enough to pull the reader in. Something about this rhymed couplet makes both rhymes seem forced. "Behaving"? Can you come up with a 3-syllable...

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