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Forum: Literature 05-31-2010, 03:30 PM

Replies: 13 I'm cold, I need the flames of ridicule to warm me up! Views: 4,554 Posted By Apathy's_Child Yeah, I agree about rhyme - personally I find it... Yeah, I agree about rhyme - personally I find it pretty dated in present-day writing anyway, but it's so limited, it can really fuck with your writing if you're trying to improve. I do like this...

Forum: Literature 05-31-2010, 02:59 PM

Replies: 13 I'm cold, I need the flames of ridicule to warm me up! Views: 4,554 Posted By Apathy's_Child To be honest, I think this is short and simple... To be honest, I think this is short and simple enough that fucking around with it would be difficult without ruining it. Maybe the way to go from here is taking on board the weak points, and just...

Forum: Literature 05-31-2010, 02:37 PM

Replies: 13 I'm cold, I need the flames of ridicule to warm me up! Views: 4,554 Posted By Apathy's_Child I kind of like this. It's a little rough, but... I kind of like this. It's a little rough, but form and rhythm comes easily with a little practice and knowledge. The hardest thing for a lot of people is capturing a mood without being too explicit -...

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