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Forum: Literature 05-31-2010, 03:06 PM
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Posted By MissCheyenne
Thanks for the advice, I really do appreciate it....

Thanks for the advice, I really do appreciate it. I've only just managed to drag myself out of the trap of trying to make everything rhyme, which, imo, is one of the things that made my previous...
Forum: Literature 05-31-2010, 02:40 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 4,555
Posted By MissCheyenne
Thanks. Even I can tell it's a bit rough round...

Thanks. Even I can tell it's a bit rough round the edges, I just don't know what to do with it to make it better.I just started writing again after a period of writing nothing at all. I should dig...
Forum: Literature 05-31-2010, 08:12 AM
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Posted By MissCheyenne
It's the first I've posted actually.

It's the first I've posted actually.
Forum: Literature 05-31-2010, 07:03 AM
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Posted By MissCheyenne
I'm trying to rework it but I don't want to fall...

I'm trying to rework it but I don't want to fall into the trap I used do which is getting overblown and losing what I originally started with. Might take me a few attempts but thanks for taking the...
Forum: Literature 05-31-2010, 06:40 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 4,555
Posted By MissCheyenne
I'm cold, I need the flames of ridicule to warm me up!

You look green
She said
All cold eyes and sunken cheeks
You look ill
She said
With a painted smile
I'm fine
Said I
My throat ablaze
I fell to the floor
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