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Originally Posted by Niels
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Can you please quote first and answer later... the reverse thing you do works kind of confusing...
Thank you.
I do think you have potential to become a poet, but you need to work on your metaphores. Try to avoid words as 'darkness' and 'blood', they are way to common in 'angsty teen poems', which makes them lose their impact...
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Niels is right.
iloveafi- Please do something about the whole quote thing. You practically have to read it upside down to understand what you're saying.