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happy_dude · 07-09-2006, 11:36 PM

Great poem, great story.
I think the fact that you gave a clue of the ending is a good thing,.
I also like the transition from a happy fairy-tale esque piece to a dark and quite sinister story and then suddenly all is happy again(if you don't count all the people who were killed). Then again most fairy tales are actually dark and sinister if you look only slightly below the surface.

07-09-2006, 11:36 PM	#9
happy_dude Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: I'm underneath the sink, now what do you think, living under my sink? Posts: 592	Great poem, great story. I think the fact that you gave a clue of the ending is a good thing,. I also like the transition from a happy fairy-tale esque piece to a dark and quite sinister story and then suddenly all is happy again(if you don't count all the people who were killed). Then again most fairy tales are actually dark and sinister if you look only slightly below the surface. __________________ Life is a sexually transmitted disease, and it's 100% fatal!