Posting poetry is more than all right StaticVIP, it is encouraged! But please post it in the right place, which is the poetry thread below:
https://www.gothic.net/boards/showthread.php?t=3255
(We sure make you work hard around here don't we? (evil grin))
Now, one last tip: it will be less confusing to readers if you say:
"bleed
through your own hands"
(the blood is dripping between your fingers)
unless you intended
"
blood, threw your own hands"
(your hands are throwing blood around)
This is all constructive criticism, intended to provide feedback for you to improve your writing, not to discourage your interest in expressing yourself.
I myself welcome constructive criticism too, for my writing, so if you see anything that needs a'changing, don't hesitate to let me know.
