[emeraldlonewoulf]

good explanation. however, you must realize that each individual reader will color what they read with their own perceptions and experience. THat is the wonderful thing about good poetry, or good music, is that in addition to conveying emotion, or thought, it inspires those things within the reader as well. They may not think or feel exactly what you do, but their individual inspiration/understanding will follow in the same general direction.

Perhaps my take on it is because that is some of what i deal with, and so it is already in my mind, so your piece brings it to the forefront.

In any case, this is a solid, well crafted piece, a bit unusual in terms and rythym, but entertaining and thought provoking in spite of - no, because of it. Thank you for sharing.