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i don't know much about the technical side of poetry, I think perhaps it was the stresses (?) at the end of each line. I like the way it emphasizes the feel of the poem though. Kind of like the low chimes of a grandfather clock in an old, dusty house.
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"Do not meddle in the affairs of dragons, for you are crunchy and taste good with catsup." - unknown
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Originally Posted by Stormtrooper of Death
(shouts) WHY CAN'T WE ALL JUST GET ALONG??!!?
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Originally Posted by Beneath the Shadows
Because some people are dicks. And not everyone else is gay.
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