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Old 01-17-2007, 02:28 PM   #143
nuksaa
 
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Originally Posted by ArtificialOne
People will pounce on anyones grammar if they can't argue the point (or more correctly they are only there to argue and demean people anyways). I think I'll run through all the poly blogs and save some of the posts. I could write a really good paper on psychology with all the info I could gather.
Have fun with that.

And it's not the grammer that is the issue. The run-on paragraph makes your post difficult to read.

Now you say I am demeaning you with an argument with a superficial perspective. Presentation is important, espiecially in this type of keyboard conversation/debate. Realize that I am not in the room with you. I do not know where your emphasis is placed or the path your argument is taking me, as would be different than if I heard you speaking aloud. Hence, my 'writing structure' recommendation was to assist in the improvement of your delivery and bring more credibility to your point. How does it add more credibility? More will be inclined to read it.
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