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Underwater Ophelia · 03-18-2007, 08:19 PM

I like a lot of your imagery, but at times it seems the meter is out of whack, or choppy. I also like your use of "Him" and "His."

03-18-2007, 08:19 PM	#6
Underwater Ophelia Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Earth. Posts: 8,001	I like a lot of your imagery, but at times it seems the meter is out of whack, or choppy. I also like your use of "Him" and "His." __________________ You lost the rep system for this.