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Old 03-19-2007, 01:41 AM   #1
Dead Blue Grind
 
Join Date: Feb 2007
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Poem I wrote for a girl on myspace

thou is thy heaven at the end of thee world.
thy faceless dreams, thy mirror to reflect all the beauty in sky. cloudless, brilliant, illuminated.


sallow rose bed skin, velvet silk to thy sight. dream inspiring, ravishing, aphotic strains, thou's hair defines thee night. restrain thy thoughts for thou's smile induces euphoric sleep, dreams one cannot awake from. eyes like the beauty of life itself. seductive, gorgeous, stainless, glittering, coruscating, perfect.


thus my lament, to know thou is not for thy.


I think it turned out real well and I wanted to share it somewhere. I'm aware that the last line should say thee instead of thy but I like it better my way. Any feedback is appriciated.
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