[Dancing_in_rain]

Blood blossoms, I was thinking more or less the same thing about the fifth stanza. When I originally wrote this, it was for a poetry competition and my English teacher wanted us to have six stanzas. About the capitalization (or rather, its absence) , it was a mix of things. I was trying to convey not contempt about God and religion but rather, the fact that for many, anything can become a god. I don't think I've explained that very well but maybe you see what I mean?

Thanks for the comments my dears. I really like hearing what others think.