Umm, I tried to make some corrections. Here you go:
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Originally Posted by Letuchiy Mysh
My Way Differs From Yours
I would be the light blue
Frozen queen
Engraved far away
Among icy winds (I'm not sure if that's what you meant)
You would be the ray
Of the upcoming sun
Lighting our land
Changing eternal night
My Way Differs From Yours
I would be the star
Crashing down from the skies
You would be a child
Catching me in your palms
I would be the rose
Newborn and fresh
You would be the snow
Freezing my flesh
My Way Differs From Yours
It lays in another (not sure that's what you meant) universe
My Way Differs From Yours
But anyway they have to cross
( one day they`ll cross)
Starfall
There on the edge of the Earth
I see the flaming firewall
Whisper your wish while a (?!) star falls
Don’t resist and follow its call
The night gives you wings
So forget all your fears
We leave at dawn (to the land)
Where the sky drops its tears
Break free to the illusive world
And don’t drop behind a glance
Haven’t you seen in your dreams this road?
And this star fall is your last chance
And you’ll be among
The magic of dreams
And you’ll leave (is it 'leave' or 'live'?) forever
And never taste fears
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