[Apathy's_Child]

You've nailed the "show, don't tell" factor. This is what usually seems to happen when somebody around here decides to write a love poem:

"I shall write a poem.

"But what shall I write on?

"I know! It will be a poem about love. All the greats have done it, after all.

"But how do I make mine original?....................

"EUREKA!!!! I'll either make it really dark and twisted by throwing in a load of stuff about biting each during lovemaking and death and allusions to vampirism, or I'll use "thee" and "thine" instead of modern personal pronouns. No-one else ever thought of that!"

I love it your poetry has none of that aura around it.

For the record, I like the face pressing............. reminds me of face-sitting, which obviously gets me hard.