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Originally Posted by L'Oiseau Noir
...and maybe cut down on the modifiers (such as adverbs or adjectives).
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THANK YOU for the critique!
Would you please give me an example about how I overdid the modifiers and adverbs? (I know I am a bit chatty) I have difficulty finding it in my own work, so I need someone like you to point to a specific spot so I can say "oh yeah! Now I get it!"
Thanks!