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HumanePain · 03-06-2008, 03:17 AM

Thanks Ravenmother, but I am not happy with how I tried to describe Ed opening the door. I tried to make it suspenseful leading to when it opened, to try and make it scary, but I fell short of that effect.
:goes back and reads more Stephen King:

03-06-2008, 03:17 AM	#126
HumanePain Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: the concrete and steel beehive of Southern California Posts: 7,449 Blog Entries: 4	Thanks Ravenmother, but I am not happy with how I tried to describe Ed opening the door. I tried to make it suspenseful leading to when it opened, to try and make it scary, but I fell short of that effect. :goes back and reads more Stephen King: __________________ https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nKm_wA-WdI4 Charlie Chaplin The Greatest Speech in History