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Better than average. My first instanct is to hate the "swept me into your arms" line, though. But overall, not bad at all. Most poems about this subject are all, "I'm so alone WAAAAAH nobody cares WAAAAAH" etc. It's understated, which works well and avoids sounding like it comes from the mouth of a midde-class brat with loving parents who's all deep and shit.
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All pleasure is relief from tension. - William S. Burroughs
Witches have no wit, said the magician who was weak.
Hula, hula, said the witches. - Norman Mailer
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