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Old 03-18-2008, 05:12 AM   #12
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I enjoyed reading your essay very much, and aside from some grammatical errors, as Humane Pain has already pointed out, this essay is fine. I too, believe that the government is an edifice built upon the fear of close-minded people. When the people, collectively, choose to grasp their own lives in such a way that it actually becomes their own lives, then a Utopia could really exist.
And I think a country who needs an anarchic revolution badly is...America. And I would be there to fight if there ever were such a thing.
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