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In a way, yes.
While writing it, I noticed that I felt equal parts condescending, a bit desperate, and buried/trapped of my own accord.
To some extent I'm not even entirely sure what the poem is about, but I know that my subconscious was down to the last straw.
I appreciate the rawness of it, though I'm not sure if it flows well enough, or gets my points across. Any suggestions for improvement?
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